Writing portfolio 2.4

Suck in a Blizzard

It is snowing. The weather. The word “blizzard” barley seems suitable for what the world displays outside. The snow settles thick. It smothers anything that could stay still long enough, even pasting travellers lose their bearings completely as the beast that we call whether slowly blinds them. Hypnotically pretty on its own, until it turns into a rocket that shoots at any undefended open skin. The sky stays the same colour, night, or day. It has none of the colours that should be in the sky at dusk. Like a black and white photo, it framed old, spooky, and lifeless.

Listen. The sounds. The sounds could have petrified everything. That infused with the hurricane winds made it feel like a living force creeping over me like some starved monster, engulfing the living, holding it captive. The wind never picked up, nor did it die down. It was like a constant energy source that could not be contained. constantly charging. It gently shook the trees. Like a wolf, it howled across the blanketed expanse. echoing. Creating every other sound to seem less intense.

Breath. The smells. You’d never image there being a sent for snow. The sort of dry, cold, sent you get on a cold winters morning. The swirling storm of screeching white took over all the moisture left. It sucked the breath from the trees that were covered head to toe in confetti. The smells were so crisp that it cut any exposed skin. It craves for that very thing.

Look. The the usual land marks and signs are buried by the new silver coat. The world begins to erase. everything seemed to disappear faster by the minute. The snowflakes fall bigger and faster now. The life that had once been in the forest had completely faded. The trees didn’t sway, they simple stood still. The sky. It begins to fall into a gloomy shade. The clouds merged into one thick puddle of air. The snow still falling. Biting, stinging, sharp, bitter wind. The look of snow, even the thought, is paralysingly beautiful. The feeling is far from that.

It all happened a couple years ago. You were traveling in the winter so every day it was snowing. Nothing was prepared for the weather that was about to take over the beautiful, fresh winter you had come for. The winter you remembered. not being frightened, nor scared. The feeling that you absorbed that day was far from any phrase. Swallowing the very fear you had, you pushed through the vast emptiness of cold. you wanted to run to safety. you truely did. But your very legs did not allow the movement meant for running. Every small breath you took into your lungs made you somehow weaker. The cold had completely swept over your mussels. You lay down to the sound of soft wind, the sound of the trees. eyes became heaver. Calm. Peaceful. Quiet. Delicate. Suddenly the world became beautiful again, as your eyes became completely closed shut.

Characters- Gatsby Assessment

Daisy: daisy as a person can across as being a delicate, precious, and caring. However her personality changed in a way that the viewer saw her at the end. Nick describes daisy as being a rose because when you see a rose you don’t think of all of the thorns meaning that you just look at its beauty but really have no idea how dangerous it can be. Daisy is like a rose and Gatsby only sees the perfect and beautiful side in her and only at the last moment realises that she is damaging, dangerous an has a prickly personality behind the beauty. Although the author Fitzgerald has made sure that the readers only realise this until the near end of the book.

Nick: Personally i don’t think nicks physical personality changed in any way ( the way he can across as a person). But I do feel as though his opinion of people changed and the way he thinks of other people. For example at the start Nick believed Daisy to be delicate and kind hearted however his opinion changed towards the end and he saw that daisy was like a rose beautiful on the outside but once you get up close and see her thorns she is very damaging and has a very prickly personality. Nick says during the near end “ Tom and Daisy- they smashed up things and creatures and then retreated back into their money or their vast carelessness, or what ever it was that keeps them together, and let other people clean up the mess they had made….” this quote means that daisy and tom never really cared about anything in the end all they wanted was their money and let other people clean up the mess that THEY made.     

Gatsby:  Gatsby I felt didn’t really change at all i felt like he set himself a dream as a teenager (around 17) and has stuck to that throughout his life. Gatsby’s dream that he held onto was to be wealthy and to be high in society the certain age he became this rich was unclear but we as the readers know and understand that he has definitely achieved this dream he set himself at a young age.

     

 

Ideas- Gatsby Assessment

The inevitability of timetime is an indefinite progress of existence and events in the past, present, and future regarded as a whole. In the book, we can relate many of gatsby’s actions back to time in a way that he wants to erase the past five when he was without daisy (daisy married tom) and wants it to be back to how it was when they first meet. the idea of this would never be possible because time can not be stopped as we stated earlier because it is inevitable. Another way that time is presented in ‘The Great Gatsby’ is through the symbol of water, it appears multiple times to remind the reader that there has been a significant amount of time between them. An example of this time is when Gatsby and Daisy are reunited, it is raining which symbolises the five years of time separating them. We know that problems can be fixed over time and in this case the problem is the memories Daisy has collected over this time frame but Gatsby, as we know, wants to go back to the beginning with her straight away so that Gatsby would be the only one daisy loves but we know that TIME is needed to fix this problem although daisy is married to Tom buchanan.

The myth of the american dream- The american dream is the ideal by which equality of opportunity is available to any American, allowing the highest dreams and goals to be achieved. The american dream is shown a lot in the movie “The Great Gatsby” by Gatsby himself. living in a materialistic world Gatsby has everything and anything a generalised american could dream of owning but that to him was all useless if daisy wasn’t there to share it with him, as he only threw those big parties and went to that extent of being richer for her hoping that she would one day come back. The main reason for us to believe that the american dream wasn’t accomplishable to Americans regarding the novel was because no matter how hard any of them tried, they could never be fully rid of their problems.many viewers can relate to this statement of never being able to full get rid of any problems.

 

the valley of ashes

ABOUT half way between West Egg and New York the motor road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile, so as to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. This is a valley of ashes fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens; where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and, finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. Occasionally a line of gray cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak, and comes to rest, and immediately the ash−gray men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud, which screens their obscure operations from your sight. But above the gray land and the spasms of bleak dust which drift endlessly over it, you perceive, after a moment, the eyes of Doctor T. J. Eckleburg.
on the way to New York city.
–  shrink implies that the road want to pull away form this area but can’t go far. its ‘creeped’ by it desolate means bleed emphasis. not much happening . its unpleasant. the area docent produce or grow.
–  valley= hole like.   ashes= burnt out/ dying.    New York and other surrounding areas dump their ashes from there fires there.
–  Fram grow garden- all imply life. however, Fitzgerald states that ashes are growing into things you might normally find on a farm. he also says the garden are grotesque; ugly, disgusting, repulsive.
 ashes are forming everything. that are the things that are going and therefore Fitzgerald is trying to illustrate that the feeling of being burnt out has taken over this place.
–  the people live in a world where this is there everyday. above and beyond the range of a normal persons experiences.
   worn out/ tired
–  you’re going to break, pressure, stress.

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